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The Death Of Alto Clef, aka Agent Ukulele, aka Adam ben Yahweh, aka Lucifer, First of the Fallen, aka That Bastard, etc. - Dr. Mann 由 karldark 周五 二月 03, 2012 9:21 pm
回复： The Death Of Alto Clef, aka Agent Ukulele, aka Adam ben Yahweh, aka Lucifer, First of the Fallen, aka That Bastard, etc. - Dr. Mann 由 milk2015 周五 二月 03, 2012 10:34 pm
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回复： The Death Of Alto Clef, aka Agent Ukulele, aka Adam ben Yahweh, aka Lucifer, First of the Fallen, aka That Bastard, etc. - Dr. Mann 由 Palewalker 周五 二月 03, 2012 11:45 pm
回复： The Death Of Alto Clef, aka Agent Ukulele, aka Adam ben Yahweh, aka Lucifer, First of the Fallen, aka That Bastard, etc. - Dr. Mann 由 Cavalier 周五 二月 03, 2012 11:49 pm
这篇东西超级萌的
回复： The Death Of Alto Clef, aka Agent Ukulele, aka Adam ben Yahweh, aka Lucifer, First of the Fallen, aka That Bastard, etc. - Dr. Mann 由 Ground0 周六 二月 04, 2012 12:52 am
回复： The Death Of Alto Clef, aka Agent Ukulele, aka Adam ben Yahweh, aka Lucifer, First of the Fallen, aka That Bastard, etc. - Dr. Mann 由 Ground0 周六 二月 04, 2012 2:11 am
回复： The Death Of Alto Clef, aka Agent Ukulele, aka Adam ben Yahweh, aka Lucifer, First of the Fallen, aka That Bastard, etc. - Dr. Mann 由 _Arthas_DK_ 周六 二月 04, 2012 12:52 pm
回复： The Death Of Alto Clef, aka Agent Ukulele, aka Adam ben Yahweh, aka Lucifer, First of the Fallen, aka That Bastard, etc. - Dr. Mann 由 minmin 周四 二月 09, 2012 12:30 am
回复： The Death Of Alto Clef, aka Agent Ukulele, aka Adam ben Yahweh, aka Lucifer, First of the Fallen, aka That Bastard, etc. - Dr. Mann 由 karldark 周四 二月 09, 2012 12:49 pm
minmin 写道:抱歉，华文的翻译应该是“然后太阳熄灭了”。
（本文："And then the sun went out.")
回复： The Death Of Alto Clef, aka Agent Ukulele, aka Adam ben Yahweh, aka Lucifer, First of the Fallen, aka That Bastard, etc. - Dr. Mann 由 Ground0 周四 二月 09, 2012 2:13 pm
karldark 写道:minmin 写道:抱歉，华文的翻译应该是“然后太阳熄灭了”。
（本文："And then the sun went out.")
"went out"有 外出,过时,熄灭 的意思,但根据clef的"本质"来讲,个人觉得用'出来'比较好
回复： The Death Of Alto Clef, aka Agent Ukulele, aka Adam ben Yahweh, aka Lucifer, First of the Fallen, aka That Bastard, etc. - Dr. Mann 由 Undefinedepss 周一 七月 23, 2012 12:16 am
回复： The Death Of Alto Clef, aka Agent Ukulele, aka Adam ben Yahweh, aka Lucifer, First of the Fallen, aka That Bastard, etc. - Dr. Mann 由 milk2015 周三 七月 25, 2012 8:59 pm
回复： The Death Of Alto Clef, aka Agent Ukulele, aka Adam ben Yahweh, aka Lucifer, First of the Fallen, aka That Bastard, etc. - Dr. Mann 由 游客 周二 二月 05, 2013 11:33 pm
回复： The Death Of Alto Clef, aka Agent Ukulele, aka Adam ben Yahweh, aka Lucifer, First of the Fallen, aka That Bastard, etc. - Dr. Mann 由 风中之呢喃 周四 三月 14, 2013 9:01 pm
回复： The Death Of Alto Clef, aka Agent Ukulele, aka Adam ben Yahweh, aka Lucifer, First of the Fallen, aka That Bastard, etc. - Dr. Mann 由 Aceris 周五 三月 15, 2013 1:30 pm
回复： The Death Of Alto Clef, aka Agent Ukulele, aka Adam ben Yahweh, aka Lucifer, First of the Fallen, aka That Bastard, etc. - Dr. Mann 由 星河的呼唤者 周一 三月 18, 2013 2:56 pm
回复： The Death Of Alto Clef, aka Agent Ukulele, aka Adam ben Yahweh, aka Lucifer, First of the Fallen, aka That Bastard, etc. - Dr. Mann 由 智商249的熊 周三 八月 21, 2013 1:43 pm
回复： The Death Of Alto Clef, aka Agent Ukulele, aka Adam ben Yahweh, aka Lucifer, First of the Fallen, aka That Bastard, etc. - Dr. Mann 由 Fatrip 周三 八月 21, 2013 9:53 pm
回复： The Death Of Alto Clef, aka Agent Ukulele, aka Adam ben Yahweh, aka Lucifer, First of the Fallen, aka That Bastard, etc. - Dr. Mann 由 fr_IE_nd 周四 八月 22, 2013 11:55 am
现在才看到不好意思……评论萌
Kerr 9 Apr 2010, 09:07 GMT+0800
I think you were a bit heavy-handed in the symbolism in some parts, but overall a very good story. Also, did I detect an homage to Vonnegut in the second act? Keep up the good work!
我认为你在某些地方用的象征主义笔法过重了，但是总的来说还是个很好的故事。另外，我注意到你第二部分的段子是在向冯内古特致敬对吧？加油，继续努力！
zaratustra 8 May 2010, 01:08 GMT+0800
"And then the sun went out. So it goes."
“然后太阳出来了，就这么完了。”
回复： The Death Of Alto Clef, aka Agent Ukulele, aka Adam ben Yahweh, aka Lucifer, First of the Fallen, aka That Bastard, etc. - Dr. Mann 由 游客 周六 八月 31, 2013 7:19 pm
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